These are more on the right track but i need something that I can sing with and make into a professional and popular sounding pop song. when the rhythm alternates, i want the pace to alternate and maybe add a new intrument or two dont change it completely. this makes it sound too complex. also when the beats alternate there is a weird pause or absense of music, remove this and try to make a more seamless transition, overlap if you have to. remember try to achieve a simple and sophisticated australian digeridoo and techno bass blend that is and aesthetic ryhthm to hear following the structure of a dynamic 3 minute beat that 5 sections that are the intro (medium speed), Bridge (fast), Chorus (slow), Bridge (builds up to fast), Chorus (slow). Let these sections be 30 seconds each.